»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #3
»
no worries
| Teen Poetry #3 |
|
no worries |
|
|
kutzly Junior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 17ohio |
As time goes by our love will grow- For some reason for this i know- In due time we will meet- Kid of fulfilling both our dreams- And I wont want to leave for you i will miss- So i will stay locked to your lips- As i gaze in to the sky- I know soon that we will see eye to eye- |
||
| © Copyright 2000 M - All Rights Reserved | |||
Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Once again you have amazed me with your poem. I can see that you truely are talented. Such little words that when put together, can mean so much. And at the same time express so much emotion. Thanks so much for sharing this peom  "As i gaze in to the sky- I know soon that we will see eye to eye-" Keep up the good work, and keep sharing  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
||
|
kutzly Junior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 17ohio |
thanks for replying hope to get more soon |
||
|
Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well hey, like i said before.......you write great and good luck! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
||
|
Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like this a lot, it's very well written  |
||
|
Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
just a friendly bump  ~*BUMP*~I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
