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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2000-10-07 10:50 PM



Dont say he's wrong for me,
He's nothing but right.
You dont know what your talking about,
Your not the one whose letting me cry on your shoulder at night.
I know in some ways he's making me worse,
But the good out does the bad.
When i feel down,
I dont see you reaching out your hand.
I make no time for you anymore,
Because he's the only one i see.
I'm sorry you feel that way,
But i'm trying to do the best thing for me.
I still love you all,
Your still my friends.
But right now,
He's the one whose there for me in the end.
I look at him and find a reason  to live,
When i look at you,
I see i have nothing to give.
I need him right now,
To keep strong my faith.
Leaving him for you,
Would be a tremendous mistake.

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1 posted 2000-10-07 11:00 PM


It can be so hard to make your friends realize how important your boyfriend is to you....sounds like you're handling it well (if this is true).  Exellent work!  

*Krista Knutson*

"Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious

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2 posted 2000-10-08 12:06 PM


What a tough situation, but great poem you've writen about it!
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3 posted 2000-10-08 02:50 PM


Great poem and a very tough situation. I hope all turns out well.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


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4 posted 2000-10-08 04:03 PM


that can be sooo tough of a descion to make. I was faced w/ the choice of my boyfriend, or my friends. well great poem, keep writing!!!

Luv,
~*~Sweetstuff~*~


~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~


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5 posted 2000-10-09 08:55 PM


Go with what your heart feels.  I just don't understand how friends can lead you to choosing between them or your guy.  Unless there is something they see that you don't.  Sit down and talk to them about how you feel about the situation their putting you thru.  That might help

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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