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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Hey there everyone, I haven't posted in here in a while, so here I am! This is one of my older ones, but I thought I'd share.  A sojourn to a sylvan stretch I take in breath of dreams Where nimble winds fall through the threads Of reality’s silver seams. Vapor blows in lacy veils Through the still of clearing thought And wafting through the monarch’s lair I reach for wings ne’er caught. The path of softness I retread Among blooms of quiet peach Watching as rich swells of earth Tumble to a crystal beach. Hawthorn grows among the wood Tranquil petals chanting As darkness painted ‘pon my eyes Slowly begins recanting. Reincarnated by the gentle lull Of gently slumbering green The twilight vivid within my soul Is for the moment...unseen. *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
your words are so...i can't even think of a word...this was just so beautiful..this is just amazing....i could on and on but i can't think of any words to say anymore...you are really talented...my closing statement HUT TWO THREE FOUR! HUT TWO THREE FOUR! the clowns on parade the clowns mascerade rip off your face rip off your brain the clowns on parade -me |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Incredibly beautiful Krista, so rich with vivid imagery ... your wording and cadence is superb. It is a joy to read you, as always! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yes, full of imagery, well written! This one is awesome  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Alwye~ This is just amazing...I like it alot...Even if it is an older poem...I give you 2 thumbs up...Thanks for sharing it!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This poem was simply amazing. I loved it. I don't know if i'll ever be able to write like you, i hope i do though.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I thank you all so much, I am really glad you liked it! *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WOW!!! This should be published...WOW!!! I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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