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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair 
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Don’t worry, I’ll find you… don’t ever worry Like searching through times, making it effortless Trials and troubles fade in the past in disarray Soon I see the signs in this love searching mess Don’t worry, I’ll catch you… don’t ever worry Like my net and backyard, snatching butterflies Jarring fireflies, admiring their senses and mien This time, I won’t release thee, through my eyes Don’t worry, I’ll trust you… don’t ever worry Like the hand that grasps the seat of my bicycle Friends secrets and mischievous acts, don’t tell mom Seeking truth in having faith in a doubtful miracle Don’t worry, I’ll love you… don’t ever worry Like roses in fields of fantasy, land and castles Rainbows that shine timelessly through the sky Family, nights with friends, no more hassles Don’t worry, I’ll keep you… don’t ever worry Like the fist earned penny, or special memory Pictures that are valued, special moments to you Inspiration from reading a book or a bed time story jeremy r "I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering, I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection." ~DMX~ "Prayer III" |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
I like it! The indirect style is a bit different, and in my mind, different is good! Good job! Vreni |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like this style and this poem jeremy. "Don’t worry, I’ll find you… don’t ever worry Like searching through times, making it effortless" |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
This is really cool! It's like reading your soul. I like your style, your words, and the pictures you painted. Very well done. *~Meredith~* I'll just keep on laughing, Hiding the tears in my eyes... *Oleander |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
This was a really really great poem, i love the way you express yourself in your poetry and this poem was no exception!  Curlz "i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky" enrique iglesias |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was terrific!! I loved the style. Great job. ~Carly Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line. I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine... |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey babe This was awesome as usual, im glad I didn't miss it!! Keep up the great workLuv always ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Very good job. Your imagery is good. Keep up the good work. Isa "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
JR- hey hun, wonderful post. i gotta say this is a beautiful piece......the style, the words you chose, put together a great piece of work! salma ps take care |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sup man? Well the poem was nice.....the style was nice.......nice nice nice. Keep it up  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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