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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ 
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~*Two Souls*~ Whatever souls are made of, yours and mine must be the same. We have grown together, making a bright, beautiful flame. God gave me a choice, if I wanted to be with you. And Im glad I took his offer, cause I found a love so true. He made us perfect, putting 2 souls into one. I guess his job is finished, cause its my heart you won. Here we are together, making our future a happy place. As I believe all this is true, I will sleep with a smile on my face. ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-10-2000).] |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
this is a graet poem, you must really love this guy. How long have you two been together? |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jose~~~He has been my best friend for almost a year and we have been together for almost 7 months...And I never knew I could feel this way about anyone...Honestly I didnt want a boyfriend when me and him first hooked up...But why do you ask??? Thanks for the reply!!!  ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Erin- seriously... you sound so happy. I hope you and him are happy forever... forever is never really a word I understand when it comes to relationships, but I wish it for everyone. You write well, the way you word things is refreshing, keep writing! Jenn |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Erin- seriously... you sound so happy. I hope you and him are happy forever... forever is never really a word I understand when it comes to relationships, but I wish it for everyone. You write well, the way you word things is refreshing, keep writing! Jenn |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very nicely written Erin! Your love and happiness shines through beautifully in this lovely poem. Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jenn~~~I have never been so happy in my life except when my nephew was born...But this guy makes my life complete...And he has also helped me get through some tough times...Thanks for the reply!!! Kit~~~I never thought that I could shine so much...Thank you so much for your reply!!! ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Erin, this is absolutely beautiful. You are so good. jason  Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jason~~~Awww your making me blush!!!haha Thanks for the reply buddy!!! ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great poem. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Oh Erin, < !signature-->What an endearing poem!! I totally know how you feel about Enrique! I feel the same about Chris! 9 months...TODAY! wow. anyways, keep 'em coming, they're always a great addition to my Thread Library! Love Ya bunches! Love Always ~*~Jess Girl~*~ If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-11-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Chel~~~Thanks for the reply...Its good to see you back!!! Jessica~~~As always you are one of the sweetest girls here...I know how you feel about Chris and Im glad to hear 9 months already...Thanks for your reply!!!It really means alot to me!!! ~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~ |
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UNC STAR Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 67Hinesville,Ga,USA |
That poem was tight and keep it up. Thanks for the reply I really appriciate the encouragement. STAR. What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen. |
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UNC STAR Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 67Hinesville,Ga,USA |
That poem was tight and keep it up. Thanks for the reply I really appriciate the encouragement. STAR. What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen. |
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UNC STAR Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 67Hinesville,Ga,USA |
That poem was tight and keep it up. Thanks for the reply I really appriciate the encouragement. STAR. What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
UNC~~~Thanks for your reply!!!I really appreciate it too!!!  ~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I can't believe I missed this, I'm glad I'm going back and looking for poems I've missed. I really don't know what to say abut this situation cause it's old. Is this your current bf? Weel, feelings and emotions well expressed Erin. keep it up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
ahhhh....erin how sweet is that??! very cute and plainly wonderful. i'm glad you're this happy hun! salma |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Erin, I missed this somehow, but now I've read it and I like it You clearly got your feelings out with this, well done."Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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