Teen Poetry #3 |
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Things in my heads |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Things in my head, Sometime Wish a was dead, Kind-of like the blood stains on my bed, Kill to murder, Murder to kill, Either way you wind up in a field, Is it so wrong to take another life, Just like the man I have with his head in a vice, My mind is a wreck, So I eject, From a plane from way up high, I jump without the parshute what a suprise, In the end I want to die early to rise, early to bed, make a man healthy, But socially dead-Dot animantics. Poems are F.U.B.U ( for us by us.)----ME |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
This poem is from my dark side I figure I might as well have fun.!! early to rise, early to bed, make a man healthy, But socially dead-Dot animantics. Poems are F.U.B.U ( for us by us.)----ME |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
i gotta say this is definatly interesting although i can't say i understand it all. got any explainations? salooma |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Hey saloom lets just say the poem was from a lot of bottled up anger and regret, heartach, More or less just A bunch of stuff I kepp bottled up because it is what I do there is no point or explaintion for this one I was just lettin g things air out as to say. early to rise, early to bed, make a man healthy, But socially dead-Dot animantics. Poems are F.U.B.U ( for us by us.)----ME |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
hmmmmmm, way to let it out ![]() ![]() "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well the poems message was great......in a hey-i-can-be-a-dark-guy-too sorta way hehehe...... ![]() "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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