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jytree
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0 posted 2000-10-13 09:53 AM


Things in my head,
Sometime Wish a was dead,
Kind-of like the blood stains on my bed,

Kill to murder,
Murder to kill,
Either way you wind up in a field,

Is it so wrong to take another life,
Just like the man I have with his head in a vice,

My mind is a wreck,
So I eject,
From a plane from way up high,
I jump without the parshute what a suprise,

In the end I want to die


early to rise,
early to bed,
make a man healthy,
But socially dead-Dot animantics.

Poems are F.U.B.U
( for us by us.)----ME


© Copyright 2000 Michael Jay vaughn - All Rights Reserved
jytree
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1 posted 2000-10-13 09:55 AM


This poem is from my dark side I figure I might as well have fun.!!

early to rise,
early to bed,
make a man healthy,
But socially dead-Dot animantics.

Poems are F.U.B.U
( for us by us.)----ME


Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
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2 posted 2000-10-13 11:31 AM


i gotta say this is definatly interesting although i can't say i understand it all. got any explainations?

salooma

jytree
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3 posted 2000-10-13 11:46 AM


Hey saloom lets just say the poem was from a lot of bottled up anger and regret, heartach,
More or less just A bunch of stuff I kepp bottled up because it is what I do there is no point or explaintion for this one I was just lettin g things air out as to say.


early to rise,
early to bed,
make a man healthy,
But socially dead-Dot animantics.

Poems are F.U.B.U
( for us by us.)----ME


Lakewalker
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4 posted 2000-10-13 03:44 PM


hmmmmmm, way to let it out .....and now i'm scared of you..... jk

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2000-10-13 06:00 PM


Well the poems message was great......in a hey-i-can-be-a-dark-guy-too sorta way hehehe......




"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

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