Teen Poetry #3 |
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To be with you |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133ConcepciĆ³n, Chile |
Do you remember two poems I wrote for a friend? Well, she wrote me a poem back. I'm in love, and I thought I had to share this with you 'cause you helped me a lot. Thanks. To be with you I do believe that God above, created you for me to love. He picked you out from all the rest, 'cause he knew I'd love you best. My heart was once so brave and true, but now it's gone from me to you. If I go to heaven and your not there, I'll write your name upon a golden stair. If your not there by Judgment Day, I'd know you went the other way. I'd give the angels back my wings, golden harp and other things. Just to prove my love is true, I'd go down stairs to be with you. by Heather It's been raining since you left me. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Tell your friend this was an amazing piece...Very beautiful... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Well, I'm happy for ya Heather. This poem is really sweet at the same time has strong words in t. You did a great job with this. I could see how happy you are when you wrote this, and how much this person really means to you. keep writing "If your not there by Judgment Day, I'd know you went the other way. I'd give the angels back my wings, golden harp and other things. Just to prove my love is true, I'd go down stairs to be with you." How I wish someone would say something this sweet to me ![]() I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I liked this, it's very creative thoughts. Well written, I like it ![]() |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
wow i think this is good and i really really enjoyed reading it. hope to read more. lovely_Kris |
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