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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Hello, This is a repost.. I have posted it before.. I decided to post it again, cuz it was the poem that meant the most to me, and I think it was the best one that I had done. It was to my dad who died when I was 2.. today is the day he died.. So it has been 12 years since i have seen him.... I miss you so much It makes me cry, Even to think how you died. Maybe in an accident or an automobile but cold dead murder is how you got killed It wasn't a break in or at a bar, It was at a house you thought was called home Even to think who could have done it, Makes me ill to my stomach You think a stranger or a drunken buddy but it was your nephew, my cousin who had done it I never got to know you I was only 2 I try to remember when you held me or even the times you had to just touch me All I have are pictures, but no memoires cuz it was to long ago, to remember you I listen to stories, I cry myself to sleep, I kiss your picture good night Hoping I'll see you in my dreams. If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
this was so sad...you expressed your feelings just so beautifully...did the nephew really kill him?...very very sad... HUT TWO THREE FOUR! HUT TWO THREE FOUR! the clowns on parade the clowns mascerade rip off your face rip off your brain the clowns on parade -me |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
thats soo sad. but it was a great poem! keep writing! Luv, SweetStuff ~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I am deeply sorry for the loss cutie2005. I couldn't even imagine the emotions that you are going thru. This is a beautifully written poem and i love it a lot. You expressed the emotions so deep that i could never try to feel it but only try to understand it and what you are going thru. keep writing. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Cutie~~~I am so sorry to hear of your loss...Just remember though your dad is watching down on you...Helping you through life...If you ever wanna talk feel free to e-mail me...Thank you for sharing this with us... It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
Oh wow...I'm so sorry for your loss, I can't even imagine what it must be like to grow up not knowing a parent like that... This poem had so many emotions and questions behind it...it's good to read something that meant so much to someone, no matter how sad...sad isn't always a bad thing, and remembering your dad will always be a good thing to do... **life is like an ice cream...the trick is not to get brain freeze** **I didn't loose my mind it was mine to give away** ~Robbie Williams~ |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Thank you all for replying... anomaly187, sad to say but yes it was my cousin.. his nephew who killed my dad. Belive me, he will live with it forever. but thanks again for replying.. luv ya all, cutie If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is touching, sorry to hear about this. Just remember that he is in Heaven watching over you. Great poem! |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
This is soooooooooooo sad. It brought me to tears. I'm sorry you never got to really know him. Great poem. -barb- "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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