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Tainted Love |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Conceited is your soul Always thinking that I would be nothing without you But let me tell you something It was me before you There really wasn't anything special that you did Nothing, nobody hasn't done before So go on close that door And take your ego as you go And your so called knowledge of me You don't know me nor will you ever Nor will you ever taste the sweet flavor of my words any longer Without you, my soul will continue to grow stronger That much I am sure of Because I know deep down within my heart That I am better off without your tainted love.. "Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night" ~Crash and Burn~ |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
"Sometimes i feel, i got to runaway, i got to get away from the pain you drive into long to me, and i;ve lost my light, for i toss and turn i don't sleep at night, once i ran to you, now i run from you..." Long live the eighties! What do you mean there over? Hehe, nice work...sorry about the tangent, the title just made something go off in my head... "Always thinking that I would be nothing without you" That's a powerful feeling, make sure it doesn't get the best of you...uh...my aching head...ah... |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
"Sometimes i feel, i got to runaway, i got to get away from the pain you drive into long to me, and i;ve lost my light, for i toss and turn i don't sleep at night, once i ran to you, now i run from you..." Long live the eighties! What do you mean there over? Hehe, nice work...sorry about the tangent, the title just made something go off in my head... "Always thinking that I would be nothing without you" That's a powerful feeling, make sure it doesn't get the best of you...uh...my aching head...ah... Spreading insanity, one post at a time "Way back in eighty-seven, where we bust rockstands till we get to heaven" |
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HerMelness Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 37Bridgewater, NS, Canada |
Very nice poem.. Anger fuels the best poetry, I think. Hopefully it helped with the feelings. =) Keep up the good work! -Wherever you go, go with all your heart.- |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
I like it I like it alot. Some of those feelings have been running through my mind lately...I just couldn't pin them down long enough to write about them...something else some one beat me to...but...I'm glad it was you because you did it so wonderfully... Remember, you are who you are no matter who you are with...never forget that... **life is like an ice cream...the trick is not to get brain freeze** **I didn't loose my mind it was mine to give away** ~Robbie Williams~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I sensed sort of an attitude behind this, I like that a lot. Your words are great here, nice writing!  |
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shadydaze Member
since 2000-10-02
Posts 85 |
i too sense the attitude behind the poem. it was an inspiring attitude no doubt. this poem was great, i enjoyed reading it. dont forget to check out my work. your input is valuable. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I'm SO glad that you saw this person for who he really is, and that you aren't clinging to this "tainted love". Great work!!! (you go, girl!) False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I see a lot of anger and strength in thes poem. Once in a while it's nice to see someone as strong willed as you for we may be able to follow your steps. Great work!!! keep ya head up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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