Teen Poetry #3 |
Life in God |
Wet Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 60Brentwood, Tn |
Life in God Flames of Blue and Wine of Red, The moonlight shines from overhead. I drink to the days beyond my thought, As stars lite up the sky I sought. From the moon to my soul, In which I found my goal. Everlasting bitterness, In the eyes man witnesses. For now the mind rests, In one of life's tests. And let all rejoice, To the most holy voice. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
i liked the ryhme of this poem. I liked the poem. Keep it up Wet! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey there. This was really, really cool. Wonderful words. ~Carly Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line. I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine... |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
This is really good, I liked it a lot!! Keep it up, hasta luego Bel Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me -"Beautiful" CREED |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Interesting look at life. But when we look at life, what exactly looks back? Our selves? Our gods? Whoa...i need to stay off the Strawbarry Milkshakes...hehe In-wishing-milkshakes-contained-less-narcotics THERE IS NO SPOON Spreading insanity, one post at a time "Way back in eighty-seven, where we bust rockstands till we get to heaven" |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"And let all rejoice, To the most holy voice." It's good to know that the Lord has a place in your thoughts. Keep up the great work! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i agree with LoveBug. It's nice to know. At the same time, it's also nice to see someone write something about their beliefs. I too am a very religious person keep it up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
wow...great work...so simple yet so infective (is that a word...I haven't had my daily coffee fix yet so excuse me if I make up words) but infective in a good way... Make me think... **life is like an ice cream...the trick is not to get brain freeze** **I didn't loose my mind it was mine to give away** ~Robbie Williams~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, this is great Wet, keep it up |
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