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emptyness
Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 95
mobile,Ala,USA

0 posted 2000-10-01 05:42 AM

have you ever wanted to die
not kill yourself
just die
and leave the painful world behind
could you live every day in utter physical pian
caused by a terrible secret
you can never tell
because it would betray a friend
hurt a loved one
and destroy a friendship
so you take the pain
and hide it from them all
never talking about it
making sure everyone is happy
but forgetting yourself
so you have this pain
this hellish pain killing you from the inside
i wonder if its possible to die from sorrow
if so i have only one more day

"scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write
"Cogito ergo sum"-I think, therefore I exist

HerMelness
Junior Member

since 2000-07-12

Posts 37
Bridgewater, NS, Canada

1 posted 2000-10-01 11:47 AM

Wow.. fabulous stuff.. you express sorrow well, but it's a little too hopeless for my liking =(

i wonder if its possible to die from sorrow

if so i have only one more day

Definitely my favorite part! Keep it up. And Smile!! =)

-Wherever you go, go with all your heart.-

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

2 posted 2000-10-01 11:57 AM

Wow, this is really powerful. Is this about you? I'm just asking because I know some poems aren't about the authors. It's so sad. Well, it's really good, keep writing..hasta luego...
Bel

Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
-"Beautiful" CREED

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-10-01 01:00 PM

i thought this poem was great, you seem to be in the same mental state that i am right now. keep it up........the poetry , not the mental state.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-10-01 02:23 PM

This got me thinking....great job writing it, I like your poems!

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

5 posted 2000-10-01 02:55 PM

A descriptive and sorrow filled poem, I have felt like this before. Know everythiong there is to know about this feeling. I'm so sorry for this. Please e-mail me, I can help. Until then, take care. And I don't think it's possible to die from sorrow, bad fish,yes, but not sorrow. (sorry, bad humor I know you didn't are to hear)
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~

~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2000-10-01 05:12 PM

Whoa this is an EXCELLENT poem. Because of the exact thing that your describing my happiness was completely taken from me. You get so caught up in everyone else's happiness you forget yourself because its one less thing to worry about. This was a GREAT poem!!

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

7 posted 2000-10-01 05:25 PM

Sweet. Booty kickin poem ya got here. I like.

~Carly

Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line.
I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine...

UnPumpkin
Junior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 18

8 posted 2001-03-25 01:09 AM

My ears are always open for whatever you need to let out. A hollow gargoyle will burst under the weight of fetid water. You may be made of granite, but even that wears down...

or maybe i read (pardon bad pun) too much into it?

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