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Teen Poetry #3

emptyness
Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 95
mobile,Ala,USA

0 posted 2000-10-01 05:36 AM

tell her the truth
i cant

tell her you care
it would kill her

talk about love
never

tell your fears
no

try to understand her
i cant

try to let her understand you
i dont even know myself

be her friend
thats all shell ever let me be

"scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write
"Cogito ergo sum"-I think, therefore I exist

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

1 posted 2000-10-01 12:02 PM

This, too, is really powerful. You have a lot of talent. And again, it's very sad. May I ask who it is you're writing about? Okay keep it up, hasta luego
Bel

Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
-"Beautiful" CREED

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-10-01 01:04 PM

great job!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-10-01 02:29 PM

Another great one, but are you sure she only wants to be a friend? Anyway, great job, this poem is great

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

4 posted 2000-10-01 02:49 PM

Another beautiful but confusion and pain filled piece, like I said, feel free to e-mail me. Best of luck in overcoming this!
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~

~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

UnPumpkin
Junior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 18

5 posted 2001-03-25 01:16 AM

Nosy. wonders who 'tis about? do i have some rival to do away with?

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