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emptyness
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 95
mobile,Ala,USA

0 posted 2000-10-01 05:36 AM


tell her the truth
i cant

tell her you care
it would kill her

talk about love
never

tell your fears
no

try to understand her
i cant

try to let her understand you
i dont even know myself

be her friend
thats all shell ever let me be




"scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write
"Cogito ergo sum"-I think, therefore I exist



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Isabel Galaxia
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since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

1 posted 2000-10-01 12:02 PM


This, too, is really powerful.  You have a lot of talent.  And again, it's very sad.  May I ask who it is you're writing about?  Okay keep it up, hasta luego
Bel


Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
-"Beautiful" CREED

Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2000-10-01 01:04 PM


great job!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


Lakewalker
Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-10-01 02:29 PM


Another great one, but are you sure she only wants to be a friend?   Anyway, great job, this poem is great
StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
4 posted 2000-10-01 02:49 PM


Another beautiful but confusion and pain filled piece, like I said, feel free to e-mail me. Best of luck in overcoming this!
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~

~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

UnPumpkin
Junior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 18

5 posted 2001-03-25 01:16 AM


Nosy. wonders who 'tis about? do i have some rival to do away with?
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