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Because of You
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Because of you I can't do all the things I've wanted to do That day you hit me I thought I was going to die In fact, thats what I would rather do Because of you But instead I've had to suffer The pain is horrible I have to deal with it everyday Because of you I've had so many surgies Because of you What am I going to do? I'm so scared The scar is ugly There is so much pain And I can't do anything Because of you ( This poem is written for someone who I probably will never see again. He tore my foot when he hit me with his car 9 years ago. I am now 15 and can't play any sports. My next surgery is July 5th and I'm scared to death.) |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
It's so horrible that that has happened to you! I can't really think of much to tell you, because I can't relate to that, but I can sort of imagine how you must be feeling. Don't be scared of the next surgery, everything will turn out fine. Good luck to you!!!!! Bel |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
dear nikkisweet, my heart goes out to you. i'm not sure i can fully concieve all the anger and frustration that your words paint a picture of, but i do feel them. i know that the fear that must come with the operations probably doesn't subside as the years go on. but just trust that you'll make it. you have to be strong and you have to fight. not playing sports is not the end of days. there are plenty of other great hobbies out there. and you've found one in poetry; not to mention you've got a talent for it. keep strivin. you must fight the good fight, anyway you can. We all got our demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well i have read alot of your work and this piece is also good. but i must say i don't know how it feels to be going through what you are but i want you to know i'm here for you and hey if you ever need a Hit Man (LOL) Just joking well not really i would be fun LOL. hope that made you smile I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Jeremiah, yes you made me smile.  I hope things will get better too and thanks for all your relpies, it means a bunch to me! (jeremiah, I think I'll have to take you up on that offer,j/k) |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
oh wow...just imagine how the person that hit you is feeling...(do they know who did it?)he has to live his life wondering how you are doing??? i know what you are going through with the pain of being hurt in a car accident..in the past 2 years i have been in about 5 car accidents always being there passenger...is that a record or what in car accidents??? im a really sorry that this happened to you my heart goes out to you..damn it sucks to have test after test on you right?? well at least thats how i feel..busting a window with my forehead..glass blowing in my eyes at my face..dont be scared about it..you'll pull through it...after all this operations all these years..good luck... P.S.~~Ill keep you in my prayers... < !signature--> ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 06-26-2000).] |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Hun, I'm so sorry for what has happened to you, but you shouldn't hold a grudge. It only makes things worse. I'm sure this person never meant to harm you. The only way you can really be defeated by this occurence is if you allow hate to win. Don't. I wish you the best of luck, and I'll remember you in my prayers! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
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