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That Night |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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That night The night of homecoming is coming so soon, Im going with this girl i hardly knew, But now i know her and she is so sweet, If this is only the begining, Then the rest will swipe me off my feet, I cant wait to see her in the dress, Me and her together at last, I only knew this girl for a short short time, But when i got asked to the dance, I was affraid but i said yes, Who was this girl i said to myself, Why did she want me im not worthy i said, Ive been turned down by every girl i asked, Now why does this one want me so bad? That day on the phone i asked And the word she spoke were truly the best, She said she had loved me for a long long time, I barley noticed she was ever there, I felt so bad, But the night of October 7th, The night will always be remembered, I will treat her with such love and care, We will be the ones who make the perfect pair. The night will come, When all is there, That night will come, When i ask her, I will ask her to mine and tell her i’ll always care. |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
will someone plz reply this poem is like way kool i love it! "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
AWWW! how sweet are you! it's really good to read a poem about how much in love someone is and i'm very happy for ya! hope to see more, and i hope to hear more about the relationship! "I've kissed the moon a million times, danced with angels in the sky" Enrique Iglesias |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
A sweet poem my friend. I too shall remember this year's Homecoming for a lon while to come. My Chris and I are going (Oct.21st) and it's going to be very special. Since he's a senior and it's his last homecoming...anyways, what a nice read I like it much. Keep up the good work. Love Always ~*~Star~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
Hey man----i am getting chills from reading this----the same thing happened with me last week. Except, this girl i didnt know---we met at the mall...and she and i got to know each other and she asked me to homecoming and all that fun stuff. Now, she is my girlfriend. Al i must say is "good luck to you two. I hope you are as lucky as i feel right now". *Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender* |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
I Would like all to know that I have completed my journey to find that wonderful person she called me right after i wrote this and i read her the poem right then and there she asked me out and i said yes thank you guys for your reply's |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I like this poem a lot. I'm glad you had someone to go to homecoming with because the person I would want to go with if I would go would say no anyways because he doesn't love me anymore. I pretty much write all my poems for him thought, and he has atleast 1 hanging up....... ~*Anyways*~ U seem like a nice person, I'm glad someone asked you. I gotta a dance I might go to coming up for a group Im in or something  but the only other guy I like might not like me or something.  bye bye I've talked enough already.Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hi im glad that you like all my poems allysa and hey i say i dont write poems for only one person well hey guess what look on her tonite or tommarrow and there will be a special one for you okay love always Branden "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I really enjoy the way you write. It's kinda innocent, or something of that sort. I hope you and that girl are extremely happy. Looking forward to seeing more! Jenn< !signature--> "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 09-27-2000).] |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
MY LIFE IS COMPLETE! My journey is done i have found the girl i like very much. I just hope i dont find myself writting about this girl "i had" in a few weeks i hope i stay with her for a while thanks for the replys "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
You sound happy to me!!!Sorry it took me awhile to get to this one...I never was a big fan of going to homecomings for some reason though I went to 2 and made an effort to go to a 3rd one but never went...Hope you have fun at yours!!! It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem man. I have never been to a homecoming or a prom. I am a senior in highschool and ive never been to any of those things. THey never appealed to me. I'll have to go to the senior prom though. WOE IS ME! Anyway good job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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sexychick Junior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 19Michigan, Bay City |
Hey branden your poem is good it has a lot of meaning to it. i can see that you write what you feel and whats going on with you and how you are dealing with the situation. very good can't wait to read more. |
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sexychick Junior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 19Michigan, Bay City |
Hey branden your poem is good it has a lot of meaning to it. i can see that you write what you feel and whats going on with you and how you are dealing with the situation. very good can't wait to read more. |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hey maybe i can bump! this |
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