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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-09-22 04:38 PM

Don’t say forever,
If that’s not what you mean.
Don’t say you love me,
If you know you don’t.
Don’t say you’ll be here,
And then leave me to cry.
Don’t make a promise,
If you know you can’t keep it.
Don’t play with my heart,
And then break it in two.
Don’t let me believe it,
If you know it’s not true.
Don’t look me in the eye,
If you’re not looking deep.
Don’t break my heart,
If I give it to you.

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-09-22 05:18 PM

Good message!!!You just open up and get straight to the point...I like that...Good way to tell what it is you want...Keep up the good work!!!

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

2 posted 2000-09-23 12:16 PM

HEY

I liked this alot. You didn't beat around the bush in sending your message. good job. hope to read more of your work

~!*DQ*!~

"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

3 posted 2000-09-23 02:55 AM

Great Poem!!
Like the others said, you don't waste time in getting to the point. That can be a sign of a great writer, one who can open up and everyone knows what they're trying to say, and everyone knows that they are so honest about it.
Honesty...maybe life's greatest traits.

Luv Always
Shell!!

**Life is too short to drink bad Wine**

Caz
Member

since 2000-09-13

Posts 133
Concepción, Chile

4 posted 2000-09-23 09:21 PM

Another time, I'm just sure that this poem is about me. Well, I guess that this happens to everybody.
Anyway, great poem, excellent and clear way of saying everything you feel. Bye, and thanks.

It's been raining since you left me.

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

5 posted 2000-09-23 10:56 PM

I liked...looks familiar. Maybe I'm just a nut though (highly possible) At any rate, it was wonderful and well worded.
~*~Star~*~

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~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

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Virgin Suïcide
Member

since 2000-08-11

Posts 319
Netherlands

6 posted 2000-09-24 05:38 AM

wow....it's like this is about me...*scary* but I guess there are a lot of ppl here who are going through the same situation or have been there... so I think it's really good to know that you're not alone!

luvz, VS

Experience of survival is the key

To the Gravity of Love
~*~Enigma~*~

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