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Ironic (song of mine)
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Ironic (song of mine) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Ok yea well this song was one of my frist attempts. I'm not a good song writer, but hey.....if you pay attention to nirvana's lyrics in his bleach album......all it is is this: 4 lines of verse...chorus....4 more lines...chorus...1 line repeated 20 billion times...chorus....done. so thats his way....here's mine....oh well.So here we go: Ironic: We're all plastic soldiers Lost in society. I see the hate within you. There's no variety. You say x2, you love me But I'm just invisible. Everything is here. Everything is dull. We are what we were. We are clones of me. Nothing nowhere is. Nothing nowhere variety. You say x2, you love me. You say x2. you're different. And in being different We're all the same.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I love how well you can put your thoughts into words, this is great. I like this a lot  |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I liked it. Keep it up < !signature-->~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-23-2000).] |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
GREAT...especially the last 2 lines "And in being different We're all the same" so true..so true... "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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