Teen Poetry #3 |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Choice We live we die, We are born then we grow old, This is life how some know it, Some of us wait to die, Yet some wait to finally live, What is that thing that drives us not to be robots, Choice. It is something we are born with, Finally we can control something. Choice is nether Good nor bad yet the counquies fall onto the hand for the choser, But some people that are so special in life that we want to be them are the chosen. We die into a midnight prayer, We wake to everlasting lfe brought to us, We choose who we are, Yet if your not liking who you are maybe you made the wrong choice. I am one who live and die everyday by the choices I make, A foolish man is a man who has someone else to choose for him. It is your life you decide on your path in life, But be warned all choices has a counquies caould either be good or bad it is your CHOICE. ![]() Chosen to live a joyful life, Blessed with a huge heart, Day to day I live the life, Live the life brought to me, So much unshared love yet to giv |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
forgive me for the typos and for posting it twice all I can say is opps Chosen to live a joyful life, Blessed with a huge heart, Day to day I live the life, Live the life brought to me, So much unshared love yet to giv |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
We live we die, We are born then we grow old, This is life how some know it, Some of us wait to die, Yet some wait to finally live, I just said this (what I am gonna say) to Dopeys poem...I think that from the minute we are born we are already dying...And alot of what you said is true...This is a good piece of work...We have a choice if we want to die...But doing it our own way is a sin...In my opinion... *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked it. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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