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Teen Poetry #3

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JandR4Eva
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since 2000-09-20

Posts 9
Jacksonville, FL

0 posted 2000-09-21 02:01 AM

Acknowledge noone, nothing,
Dreams of nonexistence,
No memory, no thoughts,
Self destruction is sought.
It pollutes the air, but you will never care.
You live for nothing but my pain,
You drain me whole.
I seek comfort, but you have no soul.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-09-21 08:48 AM

You seem to have a way with words...You write your poems short but they are so true and good...I like your style...Keep it up!!!

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-09-22 01:27 PM

I like this poem a lot. I think the style is great and the shortness appealed to me.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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