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Teen Poetry #3

Frozen Food

Wet
Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 60
Brentwood, Tn

0 posted 2000-09-20 11:13 PM

Night of the coldly death
Frozen to the side of its cage
They all seem so peaceful
As the light shines upon me.
As I walk away
From the depths of the frozen hate.
The ruins in which I lay,
From my plate to the darkness in which I pray.
As we all hunger
Something more than which is given
I find myself in front.....
In front of a plate of chicken.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-09-21 01:41 AM

What a creative poem!!!I found it somewhat amusing...Thanks for making me smile about it!!!

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

curlygurly
Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

2 posted 2000-09-21 05:15 PM

Well, all i can say is that i never knew that someone could write such an elaborate poem about a frozen chicken dinner, but i guess it's possible, good poem!

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2000-09-21 05:22 PM

I guess we all go a little mad sometimes... ehh? This was definitly interesting... I'll look at the Swanson's dinner a bit differently now..

It was cute.
Jenn

"He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-09-22 01:36 PM

I think this poem was very well written. I liked it a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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