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Everytime They Chirp
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Everytime They Chirp |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A 
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Everytime They Chirp They usually go unknown to me, in my meloncholy day... but everytime the chirping of the birds finds it's way to my ears, I know that my heart is already going. Everytime I hear them, my world comes to an end. The entire existance I've been living in implodes with a silent eruption. I'm left standing there...naked, new soul...amnesia. I know not of anything but these new things about, and how much I love theri every sound and sight. My once lonesome and bitter nights are forgotten and replaced with fullfilment and gratitude even when she, the Goddess of my new life, is away. My quiet days of lost hope and faith in love now roar and toss confetty upon their dark past in glorification of their new selves. The only constant, the only knowledge I toat along with me when I morph into this seeing, hearing, floating piniata of love is that one day I may wake up and find myself deaf to the chirping and in an all too familiar place flashbacks told me no longer exists. Chirp Chirp. Jeremy D. Halstead 9-19-00 Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"The only constant, the only knowledge I toat along with me when I morph into this seeing, hearing, floating piniata of love is that one day I may wake up and find myself deaf to the chirping" Wonderful, descriptive writing Jeremy, with an excellent command of language ... very well done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Beautiful as the day I read it. So much talent... Thomas Let not a word go unspoken, A thought go unheard, Let not one heart be broken Dream of a perfect world. -Th.A.P. |
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Traveller New Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 6 |
Wow... This is a very descriptive tale woven into an intricacy that all strive to reach but never quite acheive. Way to go, man. Traveller "Just as I've lived, almost unknown, A life unmarked, obscure and alone, So let me die;" -James Edward Wilson |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Wow, free verse. This is now for you. Good job at it though. You were talking about this last night so I'm glad to see it today. Just be careful man, sometimes the birds will drive you into a fit of insane rage for little or no reason. Whoa, bad flashback there, but you know what I mean. Don't worry, I'll always love you man. jason  I'm not concieted...I'm convinced. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
what can I say? I'm really at a loss for words right now. I was amazed (as usual!) You are truly talented and if you don't keep posting for me...I'll have to drive my skinny little butt out there and kick some ass. hehe j/k < !signature--> but do keep it up I enjoyed much!Love Always ~*~Jello~*~ p.s. I got the letter... If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-20-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jeremy~~~You truely are amazing...I dont know how you do it...You write such wonderful work...Its good to see you back too!!!I feel as if I havent talked to you in ages...Hit me up when you get a chance!!! *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
well i liked the poem, i liked the topic of the birds and all that. great job I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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