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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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All I want is truth. Break down these walls, and give me hope. Don't abuse me, for I am sensitive. Don't tease me, I am weak... and easily hurt. Quit messing with the mind of the one you need. Do not cut off the air of which you breathe. Wait for me... Be patient. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Whoa do I know how ya feel... Very good.Me like. ~Carly Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
If there ever was a poem to descrive my every feeling, it is this one!! You have done a magnificent job here!! I truly enjoyed reading it...it got better the second and third times b/c I better understood it. Keep it up I love to read 'em! < !signature-->Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~  If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-19-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I have a headache.....i liked this poem too. wait for meeee  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jenn~~~You seem to be sending out a good message here...In alot of different ways...Good job!!!I think that the longer you wait for something or someone the better it is when you get it... Keep up the good work!!! *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
WOW i really can relate to this poem! that doesn't happen too often but i felt like ur words were mine! good poem Curlz |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Patience is one hell of a vitue, when we have it...nice work there. Jeremy Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Truth is the most important thing in a relationship, for you can't build trust without it. Don't rest until you recieve it. Very well-written piece. Best of luck! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the diffrence. |
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