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Fairy Tale Promises |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI 
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She's all alone in her dreamt up world At least the nymphs and fairies won't break their promises Snow White gave her the apple after touching the spindle, the new Sleeping Beauty dreams Of Prince Charmings and unicorns on which she flys away The spell is broken just like the Prince's promises The Cheshire Cat greets her with a smile as the Mad Hatter laughs his insane laugh at the White Rabbit racing past He doesn't have time to make any promises Then she opens her eyes barely wide enough to see a face Her real Prince Charming He shakes his head and walks away She forgets to cry and goes back to her world of fairy tale promises and wonderland dreams Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
THis poem was way creative!!! keep it up mamasita!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
haha i know it sucked. way bad. oh well. it doesn't help that i wrote it 2 whole years ago. ah, childhood...... ~carly Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
This didnt suck...You have a good imagination...Wish I could write something as creative as this... *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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