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ode to the fake people
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ode to the fake people |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Ode to the fake people(hide yourself) Turn your back And run away From the truth And hide yourself Be afraid Be alone Be yourself If you dare Hide yourself Close your eyes And open them To see the world Shock the world Express yourself Be different Be yourself But if you don't Beware And hide yourself for the truth I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
uhm....well, its kinda pathetic to reply as the first one on your own poem, but whatever, just wanted to say something. Okie doekie... well, a friend of mine is a site builder and he has got his own site and I'm like his co-writer or sumtin... So most of my poems (my new poems) will be there at first and when I got the time, I'll post them on passions too... you can take a look at the site, click on my homepage icon... from now on, my new poems will be there too, and I'm gonna write some stories... but some of 'em (the stories I mean) will be in dutch... but I'll try to write mostly in English... ok, just had to say that!! luvz, VS btw, I will be reading most of the poems here!! I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Be yourself If you dare I dont think that everyone acts like themselves at times...But when they do its different...Cause its like a side of that person you never seen before... Anyways good job... Its good to hear that you will still be posting here... *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well i liked the message of this poem. Too many people hiding behind masks. I don't know why, but oh well.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
I really liked this poem. I know too many people who are fake and it's really sad. But anyways, this was good - your stuff always is. nice job  Much Love ~K~ ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ ~All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe.~ |
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