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The Hardest Decision Made |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
That night it was the hardest thing for me to do It was hard for me to cry It was hard for me to love you It was hard for me to show that I once loved you It was hard for me to look you in the eye and tell you I don't love you That night it was the hardest thing for me to do To see that painful look in your eyes To see those undeserved tears roll down your soft skin To see you hurt so much all because of me To see you suffer as if you died at that moment of the true confession which I provided That night it was the hardest thing for me to do To this day I still feel your pain To this day I still question if what I felt was true To this day I wonder how it could of been if I hadn't turned away from you To this day I still cry myself asleep That night it was the hardest thing for me to do You knew how much I cared once You knew how much I would do for you You knew that once you meant everything to me You knew when I told you that to live without you is not living at all That night it was the hardest thing for me to do I was scared to get to deep I was unsure of what you meant when you said that " I Love You" I was only thinking of myself I was only trying to stop my pain That night it was the hardest thing for me to do I always wanted to love someone I always wanted someone to be there for me I always hoped that it would be you I always prayed to find a love so true That night it was the hardest thing for me to do My friends all told me your better off single My friends all told me enjoy your life have fun My friends all told me that a girl will only tie me down My friends all told me to just not care and live it up That night it was the hardest thing for me to do That night I took the advice of my friends because I was scared of letting a girl get too close That night it was the hardest thing for me to do I say this to you I doesn't make it better, but Iam sorry and I always loved you [This message has been edited by TrueLUV (edited 09-16-2000).] |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
This poem is a way of showing how many guys like me can make a serious mistake and have to live with it forever so a piece of advice it may be under your nose and you might not realize it until it's too late to even give it a thought so pay attention to the women in your lives and consider that one may be the right one even if she is a friend which is dear or she may be someone who you barely know, but she may be the one. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Tru~~~Is this a personal experience poem???If it is you screwed up big time buddy...Why would you let what others say tear you away from someone you want to be with...Cuz in the end you arent gonna get a second chance (only if it was meant to be though)...Just remember this quote...Its my personal favorite... "If you want something very badly set it free. If it comes back to you its yours forever. If it doesnt it was never yours to begin with". Next time though follow your heart and not what your friends tell you...As you put it here in the poem...Cuz it sounds like you regret the choice that you made... Good luck buddy!!!< !signature--> ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-17-2000).] |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
man, thats pretty sad. you described the moment so well. 'To see those undeserved tears roll down your soft skin' awwwh i can't understand how you could hurt sum1 so badly, just becoz u took your friends advice. you really did stuff up, but if you still really love her, let her know. maybe there could be a second chance... Luv ya Jo xoxox * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
ok, I just need to say something (don't take it to personal, ok? ) DAMMIT!!!!!!!! I HATE IT I HATE IT I HATE IT!!! ok, I just had this situation once, where I was the girl and my bf dumped me becuz his friends said it was nOT cool to have a girl... so he first dumped me without telling me why, but now I heard from a friend of mine that they told him he should break up... And I think it's like the loest thing to do....sorry... but I guess it's kinda ok that you've written this poem... I dunno if you've already let her read it, but if you haven't, you really should! *ok, my mind is clear again  *luvz (and sorry...) VS I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Really well done, you've expressed this so well TruLUV. You've touched a piece of my heart in this one, as I was once the young girl on the receiving end of this. When my husband and I were just dating (almost 20 years ago now), he got scared, listened to a few friends, and broke up with me out of the blue. I was devestated, but it didn't take him long to realize his friends were acting and offering advice selfishly. He came back to me shortly thereafter, and eventually were were married. And so the happily ever after goes ... Powerful writing here ... well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
THANKS TO ALL THAT REPLIED TO MY POEM IT MEAN ALOT |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Awwwww, sweetie. That sux real bad. You've portrayed your feelings well, though. I know how peer pressure in liking/ not liking people can be. Try not to let other people rule your love life. Easier said than done... but I hope you pull through. "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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