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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-09-10 10:48 PM

This poem was written as a prediction of how it would feel to be alone and without my love. Now that I am actually going through this its weird that I hit it right on the dot. Odd, eh?

Day by Day:

In my void of nowhere
I live day by day.
But now my one true love
Has all but gone away.

My world has crumbled to a pea
Being without her was my fear
And now I live day by day.
And still my love is not here.

Life seems so bleak to me
While years gone by without an end
And still I live day by day
But without a love to comprehend.

Life without her is simple and quaint
It's basically what you could infer.
My only wish is to touch my love
And say how much I love her.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

1 posted 2000-09-10 10:54 PM

Dopey-Dope*~
I LOVE YOU!!! YOU ROCK!!! LOL well you know what i mean, but i love your work, it is so deep and it looks like you are able to write easily, one of those people that can just sit down and within 10 minutes have a perfect poeem(or perfect for you)

great job!!!!
~*Pixie*~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-09-11 01:05 AM

WOW...Sounds like you painted the perfect picture about that...Im not trying to be rude by saying that either...Its just weird how you wrote the poem then later however long it was you and your girlfriend broke up...Thats weird...Keep it up!!!

~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~

Ender
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

3 posted 2000-09-14 05:34 PM

I love this poem alot. I love reading your work. Great job

*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender*

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

4 posted 2000-09-14 11:59 PM

Ya know, i really love when I find a poet who is consistently good at what they do, and you are one of them. I havent read anything of urs I havent loved, so kudos to u for that

I really love this poem and the emotion in it...and I'm sorry to hear your going through the things you wrote about. We love you here at the forum, so whoever ur lost love was, shame on them!
Keep writing or else I'll be sad

Much love
Kay

~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~

~*When does something that you thought was so right slap you in the face and becom

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2000-09-16 02:13 AM

That was very sweet of you kandi, Thanks a lot. I'll keep posting dont worry.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

6 posted 2000-09-17 05:05 PM

This is so precious and sad! I gotta agree with my gal Pixie

VERY NICE!! Keep it up!

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

7 posted 2000-09-17 05:29 PM

An accurate prediction. Maybe too accurate?
Take care my friend never to realize that prediction…IE, don't do anything stupid!

Sadly looking back on my life….THERE IS NO SPOON!

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

Singing, "If i die before i wake..."

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