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you'll get the best of me |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Well, you've done it again! You really got the best of me Making me cry out loud It hurts to see you suffer It hurts to see your pain But all I can do now Is try to make it better Is try to make you smile again And I will I'll make you smile again I'll make you happy I'll let you see What you can be And what you can do Just let me try To give some hope And let me give my best to you Plz ,let me... luvz to all, VS AND I'M still HAPPY!!!!! T ell me what you think of my poem, ok? I know that its like with no building up or sumtin...but hey, I just gave it a try in a happy mood! I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like this  Hope you stay happy for a long time! It's great  |
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HaVoK Junior Member
since 2000-09-06
Posts 31DETROIT, MI |
I told ya you can tear it up happy or not...It's good... Just like the rest of your poems... Is this too the same person that you were raving about in the other poems??.. It's good to see that your anger has sub-sided.. _.~'"'~._HaVoK_~'"'~._ It's better to burn-out Than fade away... |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! luvz, VS, aka Renée!!!!! I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
VS~~~Its so good to hear that you are still happy!!!      Keep on smiling girl!!!~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
hehe, I will!!!!! luvz, Virgin Suïcide!!!!!!! I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You sound like a wonderful friend to this person Virgin Suicide ... what a great feeling when you can lift someone's spirits during their down times. Great work! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Hello! Wow, i really liked this poem. It sounds like you are a very supportive, loyal, and loving friend! We all could use someone in our lives to be there for us like that! GREAT job! I loved it, truly I did! Much Love Kris PS - glad your happy!!!! ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ ~*When does something that you thought was so right slap you in the face and becom |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
aawy!!!! thank you Kit and Kris!!!! well, I hope my friend will let me... luvz, VS I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
VS, hey sup?? Well, I like this. I hope you can make whoever smile again./ SOmeone needs to do that to me. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
As always, a wonderful pst my dear!! You are truly talented! I am soo glad you are happy...don't let anyone take that precious gift away from you ok? < !signature-->Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-15-2000).] |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
awwy, thnx!!!! luv y'all!!!!! VS I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
nice poem, I liked it a lot. whoever this person is they must be lucky to know you. |
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