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Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2000-09-12 03:30 PM

Never to hurt,
never to kill,
never been wrong,
never your will.

Never to see,
never to hear,
never to love,
never be near.

Never your fault,
never the time,
never been hurt,
never a rhyme.

Never to see,
never to loose,
never to love,
never to choose.

Never to care,
never to want,
never to see,
never to want.

Never to live,
never to die,
never a friend,
never wonder why.

Never afraid,
never to touch,
never to believe,
not very much.

Never to be,
never been true,
never me,
never you.

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I know, it's prob. really looooooong and boring, but please reply. Has the room ever spun to any of you?? I think I'm sick. (Cough Cough)

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

Virgin Suïcide
Member

since 2000-08-11

Posts 319
Netherlands

1 posted 2000-09-12 03:43 PM

heey!!! I just luv this one!!!
It's kinda like my last poems and stuff!! LUV it!!!!

Never to see,
never to loose,
never to love,
never to choose

great piece!!!!!

luv, Virgin Suïcide!!

waitin for ya mail!!!

I dream about how it's gonna end
Approaching me quickly
Living a life of fear
I only want my mind to be clear...
~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~

UNC STAR
Member

since 2000-06-19

Posts 67
Hinesville,Ga,USA

2 posted 2000-09-12 10:36 PM

I love that poem! It was great and I hope that you continue writing. check my poems out.

What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-09-13 01:27 PM

This is cool, great job

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-09-13 08:26 PM

This poem is kinda like one i wrote....but not like it...... only in the sense that you repeat the word NEVER over and over again. I repeated NOTHING....uh...you probably read it. but anyway nice poem.....i liked it

FORK!!!!!!!
KNIFE!!!!!!!
spoon?
we'll see!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

5 posted 2000-09-14 10:07 AM

Never to live,
never to die,
never a friend,
never wonder why.

Such a choice with words!!!Well done girl!!!

Lovely_Kris
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

6 posted 2000-09-15 09:39 PM

I think this poem is good and I don't think it is boring. I hope to read more. Keep up the great work.
Lovely_Kris

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

7 posted 2000-09-16 12:14 PM

I really loved this poem. It flowed very nicely and had a lot of great phrases and thoughts to think about. Very emotional. Very interesting. Great job

~Kay~
PS - Forks????

~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~

~All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe.~

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