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chickiebabe
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since 2000-06-20
Posts 1


0 posted 2000-06-22 12:07 PM


love is strong,
love is blind.
it hasn't been long,
but the love i have for you,
is on my mind.

i never knew before,
how happy i would be,
to have you standing,
next to me.

in your arms,
i feel so safe,
to where no harm,
will ever take the place.

i must tell you though,
my heart will belong only to you,
till the day,
you give it to someone new.

© Copyright 2000 chickiebabe - All Rights Reserved
Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-06-22 01:28 PM


this is the sweetest poem that i have ever read!!!! it is soo beautiful and i really like it.

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
2 posted 2000-06-22 01:34 PM


How sweet is that!!! I love this poem! It has such a tender meaning! Nice writing! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

p.s.~welcome to passions!


~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~
~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~

LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697

3 posted 2000-06-23 12:05 PM


Welcome to Passions!

This is a beautiful poem, and I'd say that you were lucky... until I got to the last stanza. I hope that he doesn't play with your heart like you are hinting.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
4 posted 2000-06-23 02:17 AM


as the rest have said welcome to this wonderful place of friends. though i have none Just joking. great work here you should summit it for the book. and i have to tell you this went in to my library. keep it up so i can read your work.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-11-18 09:48 AM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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