Teen Poetry #3 |
Love |
chickiebabe New Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1 |
love is strong, love is blind. it hasn't been long, but the love i have for you, is on my mind. i never knew before, how happy i would be, to have you standing, next to me. in your arms, i feel so safe, to where no harm, will ever take the place. i must tell you though, my heart will belong only to you, till the day, you give it to someone new. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is the sweetest poem that i have ever read!!!! it is soo beautiful and i really like it. ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
How sweet is that!!! I love this poem! It has such a tender meaning! Nice writing! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ p.s.~welcome to passions! ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! This is a beautiful poem, and I'd say that you were lucky... until I got to the last stanza. I hope that he doesn't play with your heart like you are hinting. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
as the rest have said welcome to this wonderful place of friends. though i have none Just joking. great work here you should summit it for the book. and i have to tell you this went in to my library. keep it up so i can read your work. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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