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Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

0 posted 2000-06-21 03:40 AM

~MEMORIES OF THE PAST~

YOU PLAYED WITH MY FEELINGS,
THEN YOU SHATTERED MY HEART.
ALL THE TEARS AND EMOTIONS,
ARE RIPPING ME APART.

I TOLD YOU THAT I LOVED YOU,
AND IT WAS ALL SO TRUE.
BUT HOW COME MY HEART,
IS FEELING SO DOWN AND BLUE?

YOU MADE ME FEEL LIKE A PRINCESS,
WITH A BEAUTIFUL CROWN ON MY HEAD.
BUT THEN IT FEEL OFF AND BUSTED,
AFTER ALL THOSE HURTFUL WORDS YOU SAID.

I CANT HELP BUT ASK MYSELF,
WHY YOU WERE WITH ME.
AFTER ALL THE PAIN AND TEARS,
CAME TO ME SO QUICKLY.

THOSE WORDS YOU SAID SO SWEETLY,
STILL PONDER IN MY MIND.
THE QUESTION IS IF I WILL EVER GET OVER YOU,
HAUNTS ME ALL THE TIME.

I HAVE FOUND SOMEONE NEW AND AM GOING ON WITH MY LIFE,
THAT DOESNT TREAT ME LIKE YOU DID.
I JUST WANT YOU TO LEAVE ME ALONE,
AND LET ME LIVE MY LIFE THE WANT I WANT IT TO BE LIVED.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

1 posted 2000-06-21 01:20 PM

very good piece but the idea does change fron the start to finish but that ok its still great.

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

2 posted 2000-06-21 03:24 PM

boy-o-boy, does this ring a bell. i know what you're feeling. well penned thoughts in a good scheme.

and about it getting better; yes, it will. when you're at the bottom of a barrel, the only place to go is up. good luck.

We all got somethin' we need to atone for.

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

3 posted 2000-06-22 02:20 PM

This is a good poem, my friend. I hope that nothing henders you from going on with your life. You seem to have a good start, though.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2000-06-22 06:06 PM

i know what you mean when you say it changes JEREMIAH. thanks for your comments though. and LOVEBUG theres nothing stopping me from going on with my life i have a new boyfriend thats with me now helping me forget.

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-11-18 09:47 AM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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