Teen Poetry #3 |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa ![]() |
Just a little poem, to some, words without meaning, to say thanks for you friendship for in me believing. Thanks for Forgiving my mistakes, understanding who I am. Thanks for Respecting my decisions, not forcing me into your plan. Thanks for the Inspiration in this life we live. Thanks for not Expecting more tan what I can give. Thanks for Never judging, just accepting me for who I am. Thanks for Defending me when I’m not there to stand my man. If you look back you will see these emotions spell friend, something we will be till the very end. Each night I thank God for my friends like you, thank you so much, thanks for being a friend true Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets tr |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Tears~~~This is wonderful!!!What a poem...I really like it, but I noticed one error in the following: Thanks for not Expecting more tan what I can give. Friend is spelled friend...And you put E then I in the poem...I just wanted to point that out for you... Keep up the good work!!! |
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LoveAll Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 148B'dale, USA |
wow....I just love it! Thank YOU for sharing that today! Keep smiling God Bless ![]() Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3 |
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UNC STAR Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 67Hinesville,Ga,USA |
It was really special. I liked it alot thank you for such encouraging words. What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen. |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
This is a really sweet..but deep poem TearsOfPearls...thanks for sharing.. ![]() "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful TearsOfPearls! What a clever presentation you've woven into these sentimental and endearing thoughts. Really well done! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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