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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia 
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Lost... His eyes Distant, daring not to meet mine Looking here, there, where Everywhere but at me His eyes wander Following illusions behind me Only there in his mind Clicked off from reality Denying all help He's lost I wrote about my bf. Lately he has seemed a bit distant and his mind seems to be somewhere else. He denies that anything is wrong, but i can tell that something is up. I'm feeling helpless though, because i feel like i can't help him!  anyways, hope you liked it. Luv Jo xoxoxox * reach into that heart of yours, don't ignore the dream * |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I liked this poem a lot, you did a great job of describing how he is. I can't really help you with any advice, but I hope everything works out for you soon  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Luv~~~I wrote a poem similar to this about my boyfriend asking for advice and it got out of control to where I had to lock it...This is good though...And I wish you the best with him!!! ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
What great words used. I love the style *Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender* |
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