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Teen Poetry #3

How can I fix you and I?

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2000-09-11 01:04 AM

I think of you all the time
Why must I torture myself in such a way?
I can’t get you out of my mind
Someone help me break this spell,
I love you too much to let you leave,
I cry at the thought of not seeing you,
I can’t take this any longer,
Must I go insane?
Is that the way to freedom?
Why must I part and let go of something so beautiful?
You are all I cherish and without you I cannot live.
You have struck an arrow of cupids too deep in my heart,
The wound is there when you jerked it out,
Only u can erase the scars that have set in,
Heaven sent were you in my arms ,
I promised to not hurt you,
But it seems that I have,
How can I fix you and I?

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-09-11 01:08 AM

Is this something that you are going through???Im just wondering...

You have struck an arrow of cupids too deep in my heart,

I like that line alot...Keep up the good work...And if this is going on with you I wish you the best of luck!!!

~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2000-09-11 04:04 PM

Yes, that is what I am going through.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-09-11 04:06 PM

hope you get through what you're going through!!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Ender
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

4 posted 2000-09-14 05:32 PM

what an awsome poem. I love your style of writing.

*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender*

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