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brendon2k Junior Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 38none |
everyday nothing feels the same the sky is blue but still i try to run and how i wish that everything would change my days are dark but i cant stand the sun when everything has come out much to wrong when all i want is to be with you another bad day and everything has changed when growing up is all im trying to do there are no clouds but all i see is rain i never wanted this to be so hard for you when everything i feel inside is the same i try to forget all i feel for you everyday nothing feels the same when days felt warmer then befor do you think of me? do you still feel the same? when i spend my days thinking of you now nothing feels nothing feels like it has changed my days are blue when i think of you |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You have expressed your sorrow well in this verse Brendon. I hope things will get better, and you will find happiness. Hugs to you. Keep up the great writing.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
this is a very sad and emotional poem..you are a beautiful write. Now night arrives with her purple legions Retire now to your tents & to your dreams Tomorrow we enter the town of my birth I want to be ready. - JM |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
That is such an emo poem wicked good stuff when everything has come out much to wrong when all i want is to be with you another bad day and everything has changed when growing up is all im trying to do Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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