Teen Poetry #3 |
The Feeling |
Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
Do you ever get that feeling inside? That gut feeling That tells you that you are in love Well, when I talk to you I get that feeling You have changed me for the better You have opened my eyes to the world I now long for the time I talk to you Without you, I don't know where I would be What I would be I am happier than I could ever be with anyone else You mean the world to me You are the perfect girl The way you talk to me The way you listen If I lost you How would I survive You have created hope And filled the emptiness with me The chances you took with me You shouldn’t have But you did Not because I wanted you to But because you wanted to You have done something nobody else has even tried I love you with all my heart And I want you to know that You are uniquely special And beautiful You are angelic because of who you are And you will never lose that special Unique Quality that exists within *I am not one to be feared. I am one that should be loved forever. -Ender* |
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LiL'Kay Junior Member
since 2000-09-09
Posts 21Canada |
aww thats such a sweet poem! very well writen and displayed i loved it! LiL'Kay |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This poem is written very bluntly. To the point, and straight forward. I loved that about it. Very well written in this style. Keep it up bud! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
WOW you took the words right out of my mouth!!!Well actually I am agreeing with you...This is the same way I feel about my boyfriend...This is so good...You just poured out all of your feelings which is something that is hard for me to do with words and talking...Keep up the good work!!! ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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