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your touch - tell me what you think???
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your touch - tell me what you think??? |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia 
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Your touch.... The feel of your hand upon mine Not quite holding, but resting there still Electric The brush of your arm as you reach for your coke Sends my inner emotions swirling Any touch, accidental or real Send electricity through my body In intense moments When all I can feel, see, hear is you My heart races My hands sweat Even now thinking of your touch My stomach fills with butterflies I wish you knew what you did to me So you'd do it more often * everyone is special, if you look hard enough to find it * |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is sweet. What a way to express your feelings towards someone. I hope you gave this to him. Great write and please keep sharing. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I know exactly how you feel!! This is the most annoyingly-cool feeling in the world. When i get it..it wont leave!! I like do a dance at my desk in class cause my stomach is all weirded out. I hope you get this guy!! Maybe you SHOULD let him know what he does to you...you never know what might happen! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
great poem........what is this "electric touch" you speak of? hahaha...... either you live in a really cold place and his feet were rubbing against some carpet......ooooorrrrrrrrrrrrr its some symbolic thing. I don't know hehe. but great job!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
hey thanks for your replies ppl's! yes this guy is my boyfriend!! and he's the best! and everytime i'm with him how i'm feeling is the best!! i'm so happy i found him, he's my soulmate i am so sure of it!! anyways, luv yas Jo xoxoxox * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
ahhh....how sweet  beautiful piece, very unique and original.salma |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Ah yes, you felt a spark Great writing, I like how you got your feelings out."Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Ah, I know this feeling!  You're very lucky to have someone that makes you feel this way, and even luckier that he is there to touch you. You describe it well. False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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