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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
she tells me i am beautiful her lies stain my eyes with blood i am your priceless creation (the disgust in you is the hate in me) she dreams a colorful afterlife as if i'm not already scarred open sores and pussy lips (the disgust in you is the fear in me) such pretty plastic hiding faces staring at my beautiful mangled body i am what you make me (the abnormal vessel is the death of me) (the intolerance of you are the tears of me) "Serve the servants- oh no. That legendary divorce is such a bore" "i'm on warm milk and laxatives/cherry-flavored antacids" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
i dont know what to say except that this was intresting...In what way im not sure either... ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
just had to ask..what are you not sure about? Now night arrives with her purple legions Retire now to your tents & to your dreams Tomorrow we enter the town of my birth I want to be ready. - JM |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
WOW! I'm speechless. This poem was wonderful! You have an interesting view on things I must say! Your last poem was great too (I thought I should add since I forgot to reply for some reason)I couldn't think of something this intriguing. My poems are usually pretty blunt. Yours are different and I love them! Keep it up! < !signature-->Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~  If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. ~*~[This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
i think the poem kicked ass.......keep writing bud, i love your work!!!!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
WOW..This is one of the best I've read here.. Different and original... One of the ones you could interpret in many ways.. Keep it up..  "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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sorrowfulangel Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 59Memphis,TN |
what can i say?this poem rocks.... "god is the biggest under-achiever I know,something good happens god is great,something bad happens,he now works in mysterious ways" |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
You have a way with words that made my soul shiver...I loved the poem. ~carly Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. |
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