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My Soul Mate?????
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My Soul Mate????? |
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Nici Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 22Hastings, New Zealand |
Hi everyone, Its been almost a year since I've posted a poem so I apologise if its a bit rusty! S omeone special who wants to be with me. Someone who helps me through the hard times and makes me smile when I'm sad. O ne person who says he'll love me forever. Who holds me hand and hugs me to let me know he cares. U topia - He makes my life perfect and complete. Without him I feel lost and alone. Thoughts of him always fill my mind. L ove and happiness has filled my life since I've been with him. And I realise, this is the person I want to grow old with. This is the person I love! M atch made in heaven. My soul mate from above. It all seems too good to be true! A sudden heart break when he decides I'm not "the one" for him. One moment everything is perfect and then all my dreams and hopes disappear, as sorrow and hurt flood in. T ears run in a continuous flow - never ending. Was I the only one who thought we were meant to be together? Did he ever really love me or was he just playing the part? E verthing has a purpose, they say. Everthing works out for the good. Well I'm struggling to see the good in this. Now I'm not sure if good things exist. Don't get me wrong, I realise life must fo on, but its hard to see a life without him. My lifes become a bit of a mess now. I hurt so much, its like I can't breath. I still wait by the phone hoping he'll call to tell me that this is all just a bad dream. Our love was meant to be forever, but now its just my love that remains. I know that whatever happens, if we're meant to be together, love will find a way. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You know, i dont usualy tell people about my life here........but....... you know i have been through hell and back. Like....things that you can't take have happened to everybody. Like death, cheating, suddenly becoming dirt poor, and tons of other stuff. Have you ever had all the things happen to you all at ONCE...within the span of 2months? Ya know...... i have been through stuff......i have seen the red fiery eyes of hell itself....but....love....love kept me alive. You know what though.....right now.....right now im in a worse time than before all that. Have you ever felt the pure form of nothingness take over your soul. Like...im not talking about just depression, but i am talking about YOU FEEL NOTHINGNESS SHRED AWAY BITS AND PIECES OF YOUR SOUL. Like, you actually FEEL it.....as if it were physical pain. As if it were tearing away at you slowly making you become this walking void of mystery. That's how it feels to lose a soulmate. As if you've lost a part of yourself, the better part. Your basis has shattered, your life all torn, shadows lurking, sinful temptation rising. I am telling you.......i have been through hell, and more than once, but the thing that hurts the most.......the worst pain and torture in this world.......is unrequited love. Just felt like sharing.  |
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HaVoK Junior Member
since 2000-09-06
Posts 31DETROIT, MI |
That was deep bro... It would have made a phat poem...But no poem needed...I read it loud and clear.. I'm sorry to hear about your sorrow.. But what doesn't kill us makes us stronger right? I'm just learning about life and love and already my worst fear is growing old...alone...with no family to show for my life... I feel for you bro.. I seriously do |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very nice acrostic Nici! It's nice to have you back and posting! You've expressed powerful emotions in these words ... and I do hope that things will improve for you. Very nicely penned.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Wow Nici!!!Good work!!!The feelings are just jumping off of the page...I really like the way you wrote it...I hope to see more!!!  ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
indeed , an outstanding emotional poem. i look foward to reading your poems. "Serve the servants- oh no. That legendary divorce is such a bore" "i'm on warm milk and laxatives/cherry-flavored antacids" |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
What a wonderful but sad poem Nici! Glad you came back, I hope things start to look better for you! My heart truly is with you. At o ne point I thought I lost my soul mate, I couldn't breathe, I felt lost and cold. But now, I things are different and I truly do have him with me, hopefully for the rest of my life < !signature-->Chin up girl! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
I have something to tell you Nici, I'm 20 yrs. old. Last summer I met a boy who promised me the world. I had a certaing connection with him, like when something bad happened to him I would know. It was scary but it was almost like if he was my twin. He left to the ARMY and I kept in touch with him the whole time through. This was my soul mate, the person who I could totally be myself with. Not only that, we had a certain connection that not every couple has. When he came back from the army we were supposed to get married. a week before the wedding some girl called and told me she was pregnant with his kid. So was he really my soul mate?? I think a soul mate is your other half....I thought I had that. The truth is that your soul mate is the person who is meant for you. NO matter what happens nothing will make you and your soul mate fall apart. So no....this person you were dating wasn't your soul mate, probably just a really cheap imitation . stop dwelling in your past and look for your real soul mate. the pain can only heal itself....remember that.miriam miriam coronado |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
This is a really sad ending to love. I haven't been through that phrase yet, but when I do, I'll come back here and let you all know. That is, if I don't die of heartbreak first.  --Little Girl |
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