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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
At night I write My feelings away At light I sigh I don't know what to say My feelings overwhelm me Just like everything else That I'm supposed to be So I'm like everyone tells My feelings made by people Find their own way Just go even deeper Go further every day Just the beginning, never the end I have to find out Which way they went But I still have much doubt... < !signature--> "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... [This message has been edited by Virgin Suïcide (edited 09-06-2000).] |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
This was really powerfull wonderfully expressed great work  Love Ya Bunches ~Jen~  The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
virgin Suicide*~ excellent poem  nicely penned keep up the great work!!!~*Pixie*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Virgin Suicide~~~This was really good!!!I really enjoy reading your work and Im glad you decided to post so here in the Teen Forum...I cant wait to see more...Keep up the good work!!! YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
So true, so true. When the world sees the outside, not the inside which is you. Anyhow, I'm gonna e mail you as soon as I get my lazy butt into my e mail program and off of here. We can swap stories. Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
eeey! thanks all of you!! well, I'm mostly at dark passions, but I'll post some stuff here too in the future! love, virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Wow Virgin, what a wonderful and expressive poem!! You are talented and I am soo glad that you are here in the Teen forum also! Now I don't have to travel so far to see your work anymore!! hehe. Keep it up I love to see more! < !signature-->Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Virgin Suicide, Great poem, keep up the great work.... Dreams are the the gateways to making the impossible possible So many words, for the broken heart... |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
ohw, thank you Jessica and LonelyPoet!!! your loving words just mean SO much to me!! lots of love, Virgin Suïcide! I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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