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Whose life does she see!
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Whose life does she see! |
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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
Whose life does she see Everytime she goes to bed at night None of them are dreams she wants to dream but instead are nightmares she dreams would leave These dreams she ahs are but nothing of dying and death like say of the time a house was on fire and how this person in the house she couldnt save so the person ended up dying but in the dream no one could figure out who the person was! or of the time she was swimming at a hotel and someone jumped in and couldnt swim so the person drowned all the people around didnt bother to help the person and the girl couldnt swim to save the person A dream she had a couple of nights ago while she was walking down a road at night all of a sudden two cars crashed together she ran to save the people but only one person was in either car and that person she couldnt get to even though the car wasnt turned upside down or smashed at all the person died So what do these dreams mean and who is the person dying in every one are these dreams she keeps having a reality that might actually happento someone, and if so who? The person she found at is....... There will be a part 2 as soon as I finish it and I only have two lines started! tell me what ya think! peace <3 Silent Life is to short to be pissed off all the time |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is some great storytelling, my friend. I can't wait for part 2!!  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've left us dangling in anticipation Silent Soul ... a nicely told story so far ... I'll watch for part two! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 09-07-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
CAN'T WAIT TO SEE PART 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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