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Moon_Hunter New Member
since 2000-09-04
Posts 7 |
This poem is a symbol of how things may seem rough, but then everything begins again and how beauty can follow even the worst circumstances. The Storm The rain pitter-patters against the window pane building slowly into an ever increasing crescendo of sound Lightnight pierces the night's sky lancing through the darkness like great yellow avian igniting the sky with a flap of their wings Thunder pursues seconds after with loud echoes of drumming and booming The noise continues growing louder and gaining intensity and as if it never began it stops All is calm once again brightness follows A rainbow is born with bright flourishing colours in the wake of the storm's death |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Hey! This is a great piece. I love your style! I'm glad that you can see the rainbow in every storm. Keep up the great work! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Nice poem Moon_Hunter! Welcome to Passions! Hope to read more of your work!  Again welcome!  ~*~SCG~*~  "Poetry is what makes the invisible appear"-Author Unknown |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Great imagery Moon-Hunter! Wonderfully descriptive verse ... very nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This poem is very nice. Good imagery and the message was really good.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
This was good!!!very different too...I like that you put the rainbow in it too...Lately when it rains there is no rainbow or at least I cant see it...But you made an image in my head that came out to be just the perfect rainbow!!!Keep up the good work!!! ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really liked this, it's very creative. great job |
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