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Why was I so blind to see
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Why was I so blind to see |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Why was it you who was always there for me Why was it you who cares for me Why was it you who was holding me Why was it you who was loving me Why was I so blind to see Why did we have to be such close friends Why did we have to let this love end Why did we depart on such cruel terms Why did we turn away from one another with such distrust Why was I so blind to see Why was I so blind to see your love Why was I so blind to see that you had opened up your heart Why was I so blind to see that it was you who cared for me Why was I so blind to let a sacred love die |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Why did we have to be such close friends Why did we have to let this love end Why did we depart on such cruel terms What a choice of words...Sounds like how I felt at one point in my life...I was with my best friend and some things happened to where we stopped talking...Dont worry though things will get better I promise...It did with me...Keep up the good work!!! YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes well hello! Great poem. I liked how every line was a question.....yes yes....nice indeed. Keep writin bud  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful questions TruLuv! Sometimes it's so difficult to see the forest for the trees, until it is too late ... you've expressed this nicely! Well done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
what am impressively worded post!! Keep it up! I know things are hard right now, but things will get better. If you guys truly were such great friends, you won't let a petty (or not so petty) relationship gone bad ruin your friendship. Best of luck to you! < !signature-->Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Hmmmm...is this the way love is for you, True? Take it from me, you have to watch for the signs that something beyond friendship is occuring. --Little Girl [This message has been edited by a_little_girl (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I understand. Sometimes, it's the challenge that keeps us there, and once we get what we really need, we don't know what to do with it. Sometimes friends make the best lovers... but it's hard for former lovers to go back to being great friends. Jenn |
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