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I Love You So Much
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I Love You So Much |
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ValerieB726 Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 14Louisville,OH, USA |
I love you so much but you can't see what your coldness is doing to me. How can you hate when I love you so much. You say you're too busy to come and see me. How can you say that when I love you so much. I cry when I think about how your love has died out. I wish that you could realize that I love you so much. I tried my best to pass the love test but I failed and one thing remains unsaid, I love you so much. |
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Novacaine For The Soul Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 122New Orleans |
dear valerie, i assure you that you did not fail any "love test", but perhaps are simply being told by fate and the powers that be that there is someone better yet coming to sweep you off your feet... dont look upon this one hurt and see it as the end of all, but rather as a time for growth so that the next time a similar situation arises you will be able to handle it with more wisdom and a higher degree of experience... love truly does conquer all... sincerely, a sad tomato you're such a beautiful freak... i wish there were more just like you... |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
It was beautiful one...love from you and hate from the other person..I know it very well..but you really can't stop loving.. Sincerely A_L |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! I am in a situation a lot like this. You describe it well. Just try to keep your head up... Great writing! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
someone once said if you want something very badly set it free if it comes back to you its yours forever if it doesnt it was never yours to begin with. hopefully in the future this person comes back to you and shows you that they love you too. well i liked this poem alot. |
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ValerieB726 Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 14Louisville,OH, USA |
Thank you Everybody for your replies. They really helped me. This was my forst attempt to let other people read my work and everybody gave me great advice. Thank you all very much. Valerie |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great poem here. it does say alot but I to don't think you have failed that test of love. keep up your great writings I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Val, love your poem. Seems like all of us that's in netpoets are s--t out of luck when it comes to love and romance. i was just wondering why it's been left unsaid. I really don't know the situation, but i was wondering if you even considered saying it to him. sometimes things have to be said and not only shown. looking forward to reading your other poems |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Dearest Val~ so very sorry that you feel this way! I hope your heart hurts a little less day by day. It may take a lot of time for your heart to heal, but it will happen. And you will find a great guy who will treat you the way you deserve to be treated! This is a nicley written poem. I hope to see more of your work! OH, and thanks for your kind words in your replies to my poems!  My heart is with you! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~  ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
This was a very good poem, but sad. Sometimes when I'm in a relationship I feel like they don't love me back or they don't understand how much I love them. And when I let out my feelings to them, they laugh. So from now on its easyer for me to keep things inside, that way you don't have any chance of getting hurt. Excellent poem. |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
I know exactly how you feel..unfortunately God doesn't take wish lists...if only... |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
~Val~ This is a beautiful poem... Don't give up on love, cos Mr Right is out there somewhere and ya wouldn't want to disappoint him, now would you? Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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