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Everything you are, is everything to me
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Everything you are, is everything to me |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Everything you are Is everything to me Your heart your soul All mean the world to me More than words can say More than eyes can see You are everything to me My heart and soul Is yours to keep forevermore So please be kind And remember that it's fragile It's been broken before But you I trust I know you'll be kind You'll be there throughout The rest of time Just remember this one little thing before I say ok... Everything you are... Is everything to me ~*~Just a little something to proclaim my boredom...I whipped it up in about 4 minutes to be exact. Feel free to rip it apart, I know it's not great, just some random thoughts~*~ ~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~ |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Gee-wizz Jess, don't sell yourself so short! This is a beautiful little poem. The truth is usually what we just blurt out of our mouths. I wish someone would write sentiments like this for me. Keep it up. JASON  Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Jess- Hey!!! Thatwas great! I can't believe that only took 4 minutes, I envy you girl! I'm so glad things seem to be going good for you, at least in this subject. Write me soon please. Keep writing! Bel   Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me -"Beautiful" CREED |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Hey guys! thanks so much You are way too nice! But I appreciate it!! I love reading replies to my work It makes me feel good, even on the not-so-great pieces. Love you both!! Love Always ~*~Jess Girl~*~ ~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~ |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
4 minutes? Whoa, I can eat a lot of Altoids in four minutes, and slam back some Mountain Dew® too. It’s got a nice beat to it, I feel like singing! ALALALALALALALABLAHBANANAH Yummy work. --- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Deranger~about 30 altoids on a good day...right?!?! hehe...and abuot 4 cans of Mountain Dew? LoL you are soo funny! damn dewd. Thanks for the laughs! Love ya bunches! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jessica~~~I would really love to see something that took you 15 minutes to write!!!This is just beautiful...You have a way with words...Just like Jason said dont sell yourself short...You are very talented and this proves it...4 minutes...I bet thats a record...It is for me!!!Keep up the good work!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've written some lovely sentiments here in record time, Jess! Very nice! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
that only makes me feel bad about myself. 4 minutes, and you whip out a poem just like that. I'm jealous....I guess some people just have the talent for it. It takes me like hours and hours to make one  As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
What flattering comments guys! You're soo sweet! What would I do with out you all!?!!? < !signature-->Erin~ "A Lesson Unlearned" took me about 20. haha. and I think you're right, 4 minutes probably is my record...but hey, who's counting..? Kit~ Thanks so much for the kind and encouraging words! Acire~ Do not feel bad. Because what takes me 4 minutes, takes only four minutes, I don't capture everything I should or even could. Your writing is much more deep and thought provoking. Don't be jealous and don't de discouraged either, everyone has their own standards and time minimals... ~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. ~*~[This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-04-2000).] |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
your little random thoughts are nice to read. sometimes those are better than an organization of big false words...keep it up. jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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