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Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

0 posted 2000-09-03 11:35 AM

I feel as though I might errupt.
This society is so corrupt.
I wish they could just mind their own business.
What do I have to do to win this?

They talk about me all the time;
about personal things that should only be mine--
things that only I should know.
I want to run but where will I go?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-09-03 01:34 PM

Hey i like the topic of this poem. I agree with it completely.....its like.....i go through this all the time. Supposedly im weird and bla bla blabla, all that good stuff and its hard to find a place or a person to turn too. Oh well, i turn to my pen and paper.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-09-04 11:18 AM

This is so good! I have this feeling too sometimes, thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2000-09-04 12:38 PM

You don't have to run or hide. You'll eventually learn to just shrug off what other people say. Great poem

I see real talent here

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2000-09-04 02:47 PM

For such a short poem you wrote it perfect!!!
For the people that put themselves all up in your business they must not have anything better to do...Then revolve their life around you...Let them do it...Just ask them are you the center of attention to their world??

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

5 posted 2000-09-04 03:51 PM

You said it all! And in such a short verse?!!? WOW! you're amazing! You did it just great! Keep it up. oh yeah, and do not run or evern try to hide, you have to stand up for yourself! DOn't let people intimidate you, they are just others, they have nothing to do with your life! keep your head up. Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~

~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~

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