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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Yes well i have been contributing to this quite a bit and proud of myself...bla bla....and all that good stuff. Well anyway, i have realized this teenage trend here in this room for the past few days. We seem to only write about loves loss and being in love and all that stuff. Yes, sure it's great. But i'd like to see some variety here and there. A poem about society, a poem about uh....Oompa Loompas taking over the planet with giant granola bars in hand, waving it from side to side chanting in latin. I mean, poetry just about all I do in my life. IT IS MY LIFE....i write about dif topics....and to see just love poems in a teenage site makes me think that all we ever thinkg about is this false fantasia of love and heartbreak. So.....i'll just add a poem on here so this doesnt get deleted cuz it would be a pitty if it was, at least for me it would! Yes well this poem is not a poem from my collection. In fact, it's just going to be here for the shear reason of nothingness. It will suck on purpose....take note of that. BLA: The bla's surround me the bleeps gallore a tranquil night my eye is sore. (haha) I search for cotton I lost the way Ran into a wall "Ouch", I say. Such is life In my waterloo time bla bla bla bla bla what a blaing line. OK OK.....so that sucked ON PURPOSE...hahaha thats the second sucky one i do. So yea... by the time im done with tonight, ill be known as "that one kid who writes really bad" haha....ok bye!!! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Bla! Darn straight brother! Uh, wait, maybe I should change that damn to darn…opps. Anyway, I totally agree with you. Enough of this mushy “love” stuff already! Jeez, this forum is going to get the whole world to believe that every teenage person is depressed and distraught (um, wait…). I think it’s time to show off some good ole’ fashion teen nonsense! Check out my poem titled “Nasty Incandescent Stains” for some more general foolery. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Hey kiddo, I agree with you, partly. We do get a lot of lost romance poems in here, but then again, that kind of thing happens more during the teenage years than any other time in your life. If some people want to vent a little, I say live and let live. But we could use a little variety, a bit of sunlight here in ye-old teen forum. So, why don't you come up w/ a 'happy' poem and post it? Bye bye now. *~Meredith~* Somebody stop the world, I want to get off! *me |
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Misty Blue Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44 |
????? Interesting, Stay Tru |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Dopey~~~I post anywhere I want to post my poems...And lately I been going to Dark Passions...I mean that is a place where you could just find any type of poem...From love to hate to just about anything...Check it out... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
two fast lil' notes 1) an artisan should be proud of his work always, even if it does suck, they should defend it. 2) I've posted many of my poems that have nothing do do with love or lost love. True, I HAVE posted poems on those, but also on war, nature, and completely off the wall stuff. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
It's great to have you Dopey_Dope, You write some silly rhymes, Now, time to put your pen to test, And write what you've described.  We'd love to see variety, Amongst these Passions walls, So looking forward to some work, That leaves us wanting more!  Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 09-01-2000).] |
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MoonPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 29Wisconsin, USA |
Dopey~ Hey there hun, I think that you have a point, though anything I've posted under this name and my old screen have been either mushy or depressing... but still, I like that you bring a little bit of light to the forums... Good Job!! I'll try to help, sometime, I promise you that... Love, MoonPrincess "Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
LMFAO Javi, Javi...what will we do with you?  Very amusing though. HURA!! A change!! *dances* ~AF~ Kookaburra sits in the old gum tree, merry, merry king of the bush is he. Laugh! kookaburra LAGUH! Kookaburra how gay your life must be. |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
AS much as I adore my teenage-ness and my comrades in here, I must admit I have wondered into other forums in search of a wider range of topics to read about. Love as wonderful as it is is your experience with someone else. Why don't we all write about OURSELVES a little more often? I want to know about YOU and what YOU think and feel without someone else having put those thoughts and feelings there. When no one else is around, who are YOU? Bla...good word. Kudos to nonsense. Kay The day you were born, you were born free |
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