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My Pain (im back!!)
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My Pain (im back!!) |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA 
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Hey! Guys! I'm back  I know you all missed me! I just didn't have the motivation to write for awhile. But i'm back. I've been having serious family problems and i wrote this when i was upset one nite...its pretty short, sorry!!My Pain Nails screeching.. Shadows dancing.. Fist clenching.. this is my pain. A smile without happiness.. A tear without feeling.. A heart without love.. this is my pain. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This might be short, but it does tell us all about how you were definitely feeling that night. Hope things get better As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
DQ~~~Girl this is good!!!It doesnt matter if it is short or not...Its really good!!!It shows us how you were feeling...Keep up the good work... < !signature-->~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 08-31-2000).] |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
acire~~Thanks so much! ERIN~~Hey girlie!! thanks for replying... "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Hi I think this poem was wounderful and Great and I hope to read more. I also hope things work out for you and keep up the great work. Lovely_Kris |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Welcome Back! This was wonderful....the short phrases and words gave it a purpose...very nicely done! Salma |
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