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The Heart that Beats for Me
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The Heart that Beats for Me |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
The heart that beats for me Has ignited a fire In my soul that Burns with love and compassion Seeking no more The fire of passion For it burns within us In my heart and yours Wanting no more The cold winter nights alone For I am warm In your embrace Needing no more To be touched with love For I am felt With tenderness Feeling the flame Of love venture forth Consuming our souls And combining them I am home In your love And I find solace In this heart that beats for me "Poetry is what makes the invisible appear"-Author Unknown |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
SCG~~~girl this is really good!!!  It is so sweet...Who did you write this for your husband???Well keep up the good work...~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey well the poem was very nice. Keep up the good work! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
ERIN--Yes this poem was for my husband, and he sppreciated it very much when I showed it to him..thanks for replying!  Dopey_Dope--Thanks for the compliment! It means much! ~*~SCG~*~ |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
wow....wonderful writing! It was really a great piece.... "Wanting no more The cold winter nights alone For I am warm In your embrace: Hope you guys are both truely happy. Salma |
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