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Please Don't Go
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Please Don't Go |
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MoonPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 29Wisconsin, USA |
Please don't go, you mean so much to me. You're someone I can turn to, who I can trust with anything. You mean the world to me, and it will be so hard for me to watch you leave. I'm begging you, I know you have the choice, Please don't go... ~MoonPrincess Written for one of my good friends, who may be moving to Califorinia... "Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions MoonPrincess!  This is a lovely first post ... it is so difficult to imagine a close friend moving away, and not being by our sides as they once were ... hope to read more! Check your e-mail for a special message. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
welcome to passions! this was a wonderful first post. i hope you write more and share with us! salooma |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
welcome MoonPrincess as hard as it is, but sometimes we do have to let go...hey, at least we got phones and the internet to stay in touch with the people we care for....imagine how they felt 100 years ago --- just thought that might be a brighter side to it As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
welcome to passions!!!sometimes its hard to say good~bye...but you cant control this persons life...of they leave you will still be friends but it will be harder...i hope things work out for the best... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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MeLScHneD Junior Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 11 |
Keep your head up! I know how it feels...my friend is moving to California too...But this is an awesome poem...and a great first post! Keep it up! And just keep in touch with that friend, b/c a friend will never leave you, for some of them stays behind in your heart, and some of you goes along with them in theres...You'll see them again one day! Stay strong! ~MeL ScHneD~ |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Very nice poem and first post. I, too, may have a friend moving, and to California. I know it will be hard because he is such a good friend, but I also know that real friends always stay with you(well figuratively speaking). So good luck to you. Keep writing Bel |
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MoonPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 29Wisconsin, USA |
Thanx, all, for your replies... Kit~ Thanx for the card, it was soooooo sweet! Salooma~ Thank you... acire~ I don't want to imagine what it was like 100 years ago... This is hard, but I know that somehow we'll manage to keep our friendship strong... Erin~ I know I can't control his life, but I can tell him how I feel... I hope things work out too... Isabel and MeL~ Wow, what is it with people and California I wonder... Thanx for your support, it means a lot... ~MoonPrincess  "Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear." |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Ooo, nice poem my friend, very nice indeed. I imagine that having friends move away has got to hurt a lot. hmmmm... well, I'm too sleepy to think right now, ttyl. Love ya, Sammy |
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Misty Blue Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44 |
Hey,What it do? That was really good. I like reading poems I can relate to and I can really relate to this cause I'm a military brat and I've lived just about everywhere in the U.S. Keep it up and check me out sometime.Stay Tru |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
hi welcome! I think you did a great job I hope to read more. I wish I had some more things to say but I don't. Keep up the great work. Lovely_Kris |
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