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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair 
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~Parents~ warm, friendly caring, loving, guiding guides, models, lights, truth glowing, knowing, understanding praise, acceptance ~Child~ This was my stab at a diamante, tell me what you think. Thanks. Love, ~Jeremy~ "I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering, I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection." ~DMX~ "Prayer III" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Well, I don't know what a diamente is, and I could just go look it up but I'm being lazy tonight  I really like it though, it really captures the role of a parent. Great job |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
I didnt know what one was until I read one, thanks lakewalker. "I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering, I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection." ~DMX~ "Prayer III" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
jeremy~~~this is really cool i like it!!!  but what is a diamante???i have never heard of it either...~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Well, I ran by one on a webpage and it described what one was, but I cant find the site anymore. I think it was something like the first line is a topic, 2nd line is two adjectives to the topic, 3rd line is 3 adjectives with "ing" to the topic, 4th line is 2 things describing the topic, and 2 words describing the last word which is "guiding" in this situation, then the 5th line is 3 "ing" adjectives describing the last word which was "truth", then 6th line I think is 2 adjectives describing the last word which was "understanding". Then the last line is a word opposite the title. I hope this makes sense! "I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering, I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection." ~DMX~ "Prayer III" |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Well done! This is the first diamente (pardon my spelling from this day and forever) I have seen in a long time, though I remember doing one in sixth grade. You've got it exactly right. Way to go! Anyways, I like reading all y'alls poetry cause it cheers me up. And I need to be cheered up. Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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*ChrisLover* Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 46erie, colo |
~Jeremy~ hey did i spell your name right?? i hope so well that was a great post~~ i am sorry i didnt respond earlier~ i havent really been in this peotry hting... hehehe.. well i guess give me a jinggle online at my sn!! k?? ya know it!! talkto ya soon..love ~Janette~ Everything happens for a reason.. sometimes it's bad, but sometime it's good!! just remeber there's people out here who care! |
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