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Reflections(on my last days as a teen)(FIRST post here)
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Reflections(on my last days as a teen)(FIRST post here) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Big 2-0 is stalking near Woe is me Who realizes too late Harsh realization hits and hurts Coasting through life A blind bat Dreams unfulfilled My life portrait Regrets for the man I could have been |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i see your point here its not easy being a teen and even easier to make mistakes as one. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
be happy your growing up. people think that teenagers are irresponsible be glad that they wont think that of you. even though i dont really want to grow up im having the time of my life. but you can still have fun either way. good poem though.. |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
I can understand why you feel aprehension about growing up and regret about your teenage years but from what I hear, you have the best years of your life ahead of you. Anyway, you can't change the past 10 years even if you tried  Love, Crystal Maybe God has us meet a few wrong people so that when we meet the right one we can truly appreciate the gift. |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
How's it goin'? I just turned 20 myself. I do understand the anxt of an unfulfilled past, but I understand better that coming of age is a blessing. I've actually been living as a adult since I was almost 18, so 20 isn't anything but a number to me. I do feel your point though...good luck and take heed in the importance of priorities. Jeremy D. Halstead "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
A few things~ 1. Don't listen to Jeremy! He's not 20, he just likes to pretend. j/k. love ya Jeremy. 2. This is a poem of harsh reality, and it made me think of something I was once told and that is " years down the road, you'll look back and regret the stuff you didn't do more than the stuff you did do" so live your life to the fullest and do all that you have always wanted to. 3. Keep up the writing 4. congrats on the big 2-0!! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
My friend, you should never regret anything you've done. Whatever you've done, you did because you thought it was the right thing. And 20 isn't that old! You're still very young! I hope you'll stop by here sometimes, even if you aren't a teen! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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MysticalAngel Junior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 23 |
I want to start off saying that your poem is really good. I also want to say that 20 isn't even that old. You still have restrictions... You can't legally get drunk yet... but we all do anyways!! So, think of it this way... the fun is just beginning... live life to the fullest and have NO regrets! Much luck and love... mysticalangel ** If something is too good to be true... 9 times out of 10 it is ** |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanx all for replying i will try to spend more time in teens in the near future |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Reflections(on my first few months as a 20yr) realising there are no prominent labels on us twenty years olds if being nineteen is a teen and being twenty-one is an adult, then what will you exactly call me? but i count my blessings im at such an unique age still not too young to live life wildly, treading life dangerously on a tightrope, relatively sheltered from this big fat cruel world (hell i even noticed some freshly grown pimples the other day) yet not too old to be secure within my comfort zone, having come to terms with my existence, with years of embarrassing blunders behind me having reached the big 2 all of life's wonders before me i only hope i have the courage to bravely venture forward, the serenity to deal calmly with all nasty obstacles life deals to me(and serve back steadily) and the wisdom to remain true to myself [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 12-25-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is a really good post, thanks for sharing this with us! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I surely do hope to see you in teens more often!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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